Very Happy With Connor. I liked Connors Reading I survived the conference!
Hi Connor your reading log was well presented and easy to follow. Your plot summary was good and I liked the thought you put into your personal response. I was pleased with your effort with making connections and I want you to continue to develop this section in your next reading log. You can do this by adding in more detail and evidence from the text to back up your opinion. For instance you could have said that you went snorkeling (or diving) when you were in Fiji and that you hoped that you would see a shark like Sam did on page ?? (and here you give details directly from the text) but unfortunately all you saw was ....
Very Happy With Connor. I liked Connors Reading I survived the conference!
Hi Connor your reading log was well presented and easy to follow. Your plot summary was good and I liked the thought you put into your personal response. I was pleased with your effort with making connections and I want you to continue to develop this section in your next reading log. You can do this by adding in more detail and evidence from the text to back up your opinion. For instance you could have said that you went snorkeling (or diving) when you were in Fiji and that you hoped that you would see a shark like Sam did on page ?? (and here you give details directly from the text) but unfortunately all you saw was ....